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This drawing is based on a fictional battle in a campaign me and my brother are playing. I drew it mainly to practice with backgrounds, and to practice a bit with writing After Action Reports. :P

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The battle report:

Birdy forces had long been planning a massive attack on Cloak held positions in the area along the Nal River. The original plan had called for a two hour preliminary artillery barrage to soften up the Cloak defenders who had dug in along the southern bank of the river. The Divisional commander rejected this idea, as they had wanted the element of surprise. Instead of an artillery barrage, the massive 105mm guns would be brought up along the northern bank of the river during the night. Cloak soldiers could hear the guns being moved into place during the moonless summer night and reinforced their positions along the opposite bank, setting up improvised machine-gun bunkers, stringing barbed wire and laying mines. With a reinforced rifle company, they were expected to repel any Birdy assault.

General Brady, commander in charge of Birdy forces had planned for the assault to commence a half an hour before sunrise, giving his men time to assemble and cross the river while still under the cover of darkness. Once his men had made it to the other side, his forces would establish a perimeter and await for the light of daybreak before commencing with the attack. The 105mm guns would remain on the opposite river bank and provide direct fire overwatch.
From the start, the plan ran into problems. Birdy soldiers, while attempting to get their little rubber assault boats into the river, made such a racket stumbling around in the dark that the Cloak forces could clearly hear them from across the raging river. And just as the men had begun to ferry themselves across the river, a flare went up and lit the night sky. All along the river, Cloak machine guns opened up with a hail of fire, their bullets shredding the little rubber boats.

It seemed as though the assault was going to fail before it even truly began. General Brady, watching from his command post several hundred meters from the river, jumped up in horror and immediately ordered a retreat. But just as Brady gave the order, the 105mm guns which had been covering the amphibious assault, opened up with a deafening volley. This direct fire barrage proved to be the turning point. You see, the Cloak machine gun emplacements hadn't time to properly range their weapons, and as a result, they chose to use tracers to improve their accuracy. These tracers in the twilight sky, though devastating to the amphibious forces they were aimed at, revealed the position of each Cloak strongpoint, which the Birdy 105mm gunners could sight in on. After five minutes of constant shelling , all the Cloak forward positions had been silenced. General Brady pressed the attack forward.

By sunrise, General Brady had pushed two battalions of Light infantry across the river, and began to set up life lines. His casualties had been light, having only lost 22 men in the initial crossing. Cloak forces, on the other hand, had lost all their company's heavy machine guns, with 16 dead, 20 wounded, and 6 missing, including their artillery forward observer, a loss which would effect their performance for the rest of the day.

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:iconpanzerfire:
Looks that the guy with the grenade on his hand is ready to take the enemy CO in a kamikaze move. :lol:
Great work!

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:icontwitchy01:
Birdy had the right plan

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:iconaimaster:
Birdy was a coward, but had the right idea to pull back. It was more or less his troops faults: QUIET!

Not only that, I love your work, I need to type some short stories too.

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:iconaimaster:
Oh, and what sort of battle for what sort of game? If it's anything I have i'd love to play you sometime, COH is my best guess. 105's in that game can only indirect, but are WICKED banes, 3 in a barrage kill everything they fire at.

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:iconpnzrkomandant1945:
I know,The Hummels are my favorite,But the editors really complicated,so I stuck with downloading things.

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:iconshinogami:
a great piece with a lot of detail and depth, along with some great coloring--I really get drawn across the entierty of it, but the focal points in the foreground are still obvious (without being glaring)
the fiction accompanying is also just great!

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"When a true genius appears in the world, you may know him by this sign, that the dunces are all in confederacy against him.
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:iconshufly:
great work man, sucks I came in to late before all the comments I wanted to say have already been said XD. Anywho great work with your story telling in this one. The colors remind me a lil of battalion wars for the gamecube (or wii). Great work!

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:iconaimaster:
Hm, so you play COH? I like the game, but against other player, it's almost worthless to make a dug in area: Bombardments, Grenades, ETC. but when you both give each other time, it can be a cool game WITHOUT tanks or Artillery. Hey, if you play it, MSG me your online name, I'll add you and we can tango sometime!

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'Only those who fight stand a chance to see tomorrow!'
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:iconpimphand:
As always..really nice work.

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